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历年大学英语四级真题及答案解析之写作(2022年6月第三套)

Part I Writing (30minutes)Directions: Suppose you are going to write a proposal to your school clinic for improving its service. You are to write about its current problems and possible solutions to these problems. You will have 30 minutes to write the

Part I Writing (30minutes)

Directions: suppose you are going to write a proposal to your school clinic for improving its service. You are to write about its current problems and possible solutions to these problems. You will have 30 minutes to write the proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 word.

范文:

Dear School Clinic Administrators,

I'm writing to propose some improvements to the current service of our school clinic. There are several issues that need urgent attention.

Firstly, the waiting time is often excessively long. During peak hours, students have to queue for a long time before seeing a doctor, which is not only a waste of time but also may delay the treatment of urgent cases. Secondly, the medical supplies are sometimes insufficient. For example, there have been occasions when common cold medicines were out of stock. Thirdly, the communication between doctors and students is not satisfactory. Some doctors are not patient enough in explaining the diagnosis and treatment plan.

To solve these problems, here are some suggestions. For the long waiting time, the clinic can implement an online appointment system. This way, students can book an appointment in advance and avoid long - term queuing. Regarding the insufficient medical supplies, a regular inventory check should be carried out, and the clinic should establish a better supply chain to ensure a stable stock. As for the communication issue, doctors can receive training on effective communication skills to better interact with students.

I sincerely hope that these suggestions can be considered and implemented to improve the service of our school clinic.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Chinese Version

尊敬的学校医务室管理人员:

我写这封信是为了对我们学校医务室目前的服务提出一些改进建议。目前存在几个亟待解决的问题。

首先,等待时间往往过长。在高峰时段,学生们在见到医生之前不得不排很长时间的队,这不仅浪费时间,还可能会延误紧急病例的治疗。其次,医疗用品有时供应不足。例如,曾出现过普通感冒药缺货的情况。第三,医生和学生的沟通情况不太令人满意。有些医生在解释诊断和治疗方案时不够耐心。

为了解决这些问题,这里有一些建议。对于等待时间长的问题,医务室可以实施在线预约系统。这样,学生们可以提前预约,避免长时间排队。关于医疗用品供应不足的问题,应该进行定期的库存检查,医务室还应建立更好的供应链,以确保库存稳定。至于沟通问题,医生可以接受有效沟通技巧方面的培训,以便更好地与学生交流。

我真诚地希望这些建议能够得到考虑并实施,以改善我们学校医务室的服务。

感谢您抽出时间阅读并考虑我的建议。

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历年大学英语四级真题及答案解析之写作(2022年6月第三套)

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