第二 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语:
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _____ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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人的故事结局。
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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. A wave of despair washed over Jane. She was hungry, cold, and utterly alone. Lying there, she thought of Tom and their silly quarrel. If only she could take it back. The thought of never seeing him again was unbearable. She clutched her yellow blouse, the only bright thing in the dark, and made a promise to herself: she would survive this night and find her way back to him. With this newfound determination, she forced herself to sleep, dreaming of Tom’s warm embrace.
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up. The first rays of sunlight gave her new hope. She remembered the stream and decided to follow it once more. After what felt like an eternity, she heard a familiar voice calling her name. “Jane!” She looked up and saw Tom rushing towards her, followed by two rescuers. Tears of joy streamed down her face. They had found her! The unpleasant subject that started their quarrel now seemed so insignificant. All that mattered was that they were together. As Tom held her tightly, Jane whispered, “I’m so sorry. I love you.” In that moment, under the vast sky, their love felt stronger than ever before.
